Writing a Compelling College Essay
The dreaded personal statement, personal essay, college admission essay, etc. It goes by many names. Maybe you already know what you want to write about, maybe you’re dreading writing it, maybe you’ve had it written since your first day of 9th grade. Whether you’re just starting your essay or want to rework the one you wrote back in the day, here are some Do’s and Don’ts of a compelling essay that can show admission counselors who you are!
Do: Write in your own voice.
We are not looking for the next Albert Einstein or for you to be a walking thesaurus! Write how you typically would to a friend, parent, classmate, teacher, etc. Be sure to be professional, but also be true to you and your writing style.
Don’t: Write about something you think we want to hear.
Sometimes applicants think we want to hear about a specific experience, hardship, involvement, etc. There is no preferred story we want to see or read. We want to hear about what is truly important or integral to who you are and your story. No need to share if it seems forced.
Do: Get a second opinion.
Have someone you are comfortable with give their feedback and look at your essay. It can be a teacher, friend, counselor, parent, etc. Ask them what they learned about you or what the main highlights of your essay were to see if it was similar or different to what you wanted to convey.
Don’t: Pick a prompt that you are not confident in.
In the Common Application, you can pick from seven different prompts. It does not matter which prompt you pick! We recommend picking a prompt that you feel that you can write strongly about or have more ideas about than another.
Do: Help us understand the why and stay focused.
When writing, students will spend most of their essay on the lead up or backstory to set the scene for the reader. While this is helpful and can provide some important context, we want to know the why! Why was this important to you? What did you learn from this experience, person, etc.? How did it shape you as a person, sibling, daughter/son, student? We want to get to the core of who our applicants are, as much as we can within the Common Application. This is a time to be introspective! Also, it is tempting to try to fit many different stories or experiences into this one essay, but do not try to do too much! Focus on one story (instead of two or more) as it can be tricky to navigate or connect these multiple topics or ideas.
Don’t: Think this isn’t a human experience.
Admission counselors are real people. There are individuals behind the screens reading the apps! The whole college admission process is a human one. You have lived experiences that are personal and integral to you. We are reading your story and getting context into who you are, so feel free to be as honest as you are comfortable being, while remaining professional.
Do: Proofread your essay.
Make sure to triple check your essay for punctuation and grammatical errors. Once again, this is where having another set of eyes on your essay can be helpful to make sure that the the writing comes off clear and correct. (See what I did there.) Also, this essay will be sent to every school you pick for the Common Application, so unless you want every school to know you applied to USC, do not include specific colleges in this section.
Don’t: Be afraid of what to write about or think you do not have a story to tell!
You may be scared to approach this essay because you feel you do not have a story to tell, or a big event that happened in your life, or a role model to speak of. That is ok! There are so many things that make you, you! You can write about your favorite food, activity, or your passion for trains! This is where we get to see your interests and voice shine through. This is why many say the essay in college admissions is so important. These essays can truly be about anything that addresses the prompt! As a counselor, I’ve read essays about pets, grandparents, parents, leadership in organizations, Legos, books, and many more topics! Just like we do not have preferred activities when it comes to your resume, we don’t have a preferred essay topic. Just be authentic, tell the admission office what you want us to know, and, most importantly, tie it back to the ‘why’ of the writing.
Do: Have fun!
While this process may be daunting, scary, or hard to begin, believe in yourself! You can make a list of the topics you are interested in writing about and see if they align with any prompts. This may be a great starting point. The first draft, most likely, will not be the final draft! You will go back to the drawing board so many times, so do not be discouraged.
These Do’s and Don’ts are a great starting place for learning to write a compelling essay. The main takeaways, if anything, are to be yourself, remember your why when writing, and WRITE ON!
Written by: Audrey Burba, Senior Assistant Director - USC Office of Admission